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Post by job on Jun 26, 2009 11:39:23 GMT -5
Elegy: House and Home
The house is crying in its timber, its walls, its shadows Because the proper realm of life has no yard In which to play or work or bury its dead.
We are neighborhoods, not a community. Our eyes ache with too much that grows by hand And not enough that grows by root, cloud and hand.
We are gardeners without seed, carpenters Lacking foundation. And, yes, grass without wind, We know our secrets, but are too blind to play them out.
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Post by gmspencer on Jun 26, 2009 18:44:40 GMT -5
I only wish I had the technical skill to offer you something a fine as you did me, but I don't. But I can say this, this poem made me a ache on the inside and it left me longing for more of it. Absolutely beautiful. "Crying in the timber, its wall" reminded me immediately of "Those Winter Sundays," and "grass without wind" like it right out of the Bible. I want to learn how to be more technical in the way I talk about poem. Any suggestions? Thanks for a lovely, powerful poem.
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