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Post by Bernardo on Aug 11, 2006 18:09:47 GMT -5
I've recently been working on this drawing. I realize it's got a bunch of flaws, but unfortunately, I've already inked what you see so I can only add things rather than remove them. Right now I've reached a bit of a stalemate with it. I was excited about it when I started drawing it, but I'm not very pleased with the results thus far. If you have any suggestions concerning lighting, background, or lighting for the background it would be most appreciated. Also, even if I can't erase anything, if you have any constructive criticism on what is already there (anatomy, lighting, etc.), it would be most appreciated.  |
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Post by deirdre on Aug 14, 2006 9:04:56 GMT -5
The drawing is not showing up - try <img>http://www.imgurl.jpg</img>, only using brackets: []. It's a bit confusing for someone who uses html.
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Post by Bernardo on Aug 14, 2006 10:55:36 GMT -5
That's odd. It *was* showing up before! I'll see what I can do.
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Post by Bernardo on Aug 14, 2006 15:16:35 GMT -5
OK, it should be working now. At least I can see it.
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Post by deirdre on Aug 15, 2006 16:13:07 GMT -5
It's very nice - I like the tufts of wisping hair and the curve of the body. The hidden face, too - angry? Simply rocking out? In an agony or ecstacy? The mike does seem a bit big in comparison to the body, and the arm that grasps it seems a little off, but eh!
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Post by Bernardo on Aug 15, 2006 21:27:12 GMT -5
Well, I see him as rocking out rather than being angry. The mike *is* too long, and the arm is also off, a bit too short perhaps. Too bad I didn't change it before inking it!
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Post by walker on Aug 16, 2006 13:02:30 GMT -5
I'm still in the "can't see it" phase. I've tried on my home computer and my library computer. Is there any other way I could see it?
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Post by deirdre on Aug 16, 2006 14:31:37 GMT -5
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Post by Bernardo on Aug 16, 2006 14:56:55 GMT -5
That's odd. Somehow I can see it without any problem!
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Post by walker on Aug 16, 2006 23:54:48 GMT -5
Woah, now I see it and it's an amazing picture! I love it. I, personally, dig the microphone. Its perfect, almost stylized rigidity in reference to the malleable body is a nice touch. Other highlights, the sneakers and the back pocket on the jeans. Sweet!
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Rieping
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Post by Rieping on Sept 11, 2006 5:04:38 GMT -5
Hmm.... I can't see it, and when I clicked on Deirdre's helpful link the browser opened up a page shouting, "ERROR: The requested URL could not be retrieved."  |
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